I was not happy with my grades. I was o.k. with a 6, not happy with two 5's and particularly unhappy with a 4. I think some of the things that I can do to improve my Using language criteria is maybe being more formal and using a more appropriate style, and paying more attention to spelling mistakes, like not capitalizing the word English. I also think that to improve my Analysing grade I could focus more on how and why did certain factors affect my English instead of just listing them out. I focused too much on the factors that affected my English instead of analyzing them and the reason they affected my English. I also should have organized my essay in a better, letter-like style, while I did not pay enough attention to that. I think that something that I did do good was making the letter personal and describing my personal factors instead of general factors. I used a few personal examples and stories, but I didn't analyse them deep enough. I also could have developed more my ideas, instead of just leaving them superficial and just stating facts. I want to improve a lot on these grades.